Juice1300's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love Today]

I just finished watching your flash, "Incident in the Alley", and I wanted to see more of your stuff.

So wow, considering you were new to Flash when you made this, it was really good! Most of the "this is my first flash ever" stuff is actually... well, very poorly drawn and animated. This was smooth, and even cute to boot!
(It probably helped that I'm also a huge fan of Mika.)

You've improved so much, too! I'm looking forward to seeing more from you~ =D

myoneandonly responds:

Oh wow, thanks so much! I definitely hope to live up to the expectations!

[Incident in the Alley]

Love it! Certainly deserved front page.
I'm going to go watch the rest of your stuff now, and I hope to see more soon!

myoneandonly responds:

Oh wow, thank you! I hope to be more active!

[I Love My Computer]

Haha, I love his little dance. Good choice for music, good sound.
I wanna know what happens T_T Does it live? DOES IT LIVE?!?!? Does love pull the computer through?!?!??!
*ahem*
But seriously, I'd probably watch more of your animations. I am looking forward to when you have had lots of practice!

Juangatillo responds:

thanks, i hope i will improve my animation skills for the next time

[Mario is a monster]

Holy crap, psovegeta! That's interesting to know... THAT MONSTER!

Anyway, on to the review.
Good idea, it's pretty funny. I have to say, though, that the voice acting *is* very mumbled and hard to understand. I still can't figure out what he's saying at the beginning even after hearing it loop so many times.
Perhaps you need a better microphone. You should also work on your annunciation.
Colour would be nice, too, but hey, if you're a beginner at this (i'm guessing), then it's understandable. Heck, I couldn't animate anything at all. You gotta start somewhere, right?

All in all, I like the idea, the final line about the voices is a good touch, but the voice quality really, really needs work.

rickytickytavi94 responds:

thank you for your honest review :) yes, i am new to animating and i wasn't really taking this one seriously, i spent a couple hours on it :p but i will improve on my next one :) But yeah, thank you so much